Her unknown Destiny



Gazing at the parallel tracks,
she reckons something in her life
That they never meet.

Quite low perhaps, they both run
In their own parallel axes.
Only the railroad binds them

Beneath, though, can never be seen.
She reckons her bond with someone
so-called bond existed virtually,

Having a glance through
a hole of the world's darkness.
little known to her, she was
bound to those bars of
homemade prison.

little known to her, she cannot
make the tracks meet
running at a low distance parting

A little unknown to the Little one
defining life is a void task,
to meet up something undesired.

Is it worthful calling her life
looking through the lens of
her family or society or is it a
so-called life that remains undefined!

About this poem

About a girl, symbolizing a view from her window in a room to her actual life and insecurities and about having someone who can mean her a lot with a trade-off of what society and her parents might object and refuse .

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Written on May 16, 2022

Submitted by mpriyatham2000 on May 16, 2022

Modified by mpriyatham2000 on July 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAB CXX XCX XXXDC XBX CXB ADXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 727
Words 143
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 5, 3, 3, 4

Mudavath Priyatham Naik

Final Year UG student, Electrical Engineering, IIT Kharagpur, India. more…

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    Hey guys, this is priyatham pretty new to this community, lemme know if u have any feedback on my 1st one, so that I can improve , thanks!
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