Broken Betrayal, Broken...



Bouldering through misbehaved beings;
Holding on to unexpected scenes;
Swivels of silences makes me forget to breathe;
Hold on as through the difficulties I weave.

Fighting not to carry my heart on my sleeve;
As rebellion begs me to leave;
Imprisoned in undeniable dedication;
What an overpriced population.

The Desperate differences causes an indescribable sensation;
What an unaffordable inflation;
Brittle bones with indirect correction;
A sacrifice that brings about a succession.

It's simple samples of retaliation that falls;
In endless darkened halls;
A need and desire pushing against my walls.

Create misbelief, make the fantasy, bring it through to reality;
Break the blindness  to light let me behold the falicy;
Everything seen through your eyes,
thoughts through your mind;
A beat that beats with life struggling to find;
Cloned colonies of you winding within completely  suffocated,  left for dead
Who am I? Have we ever met?

The perfection of a presence, imprisoned in what you deemed being Free;
Vigorously fighting,moving, pushing , struggling nothing being able to flee;
Mirror mirror on the wall shackles binding painfull betrayal it brings;
Bring about your nightmare, a broken  melody has burned my wings.

About this poem

Being caught up with a narcissist, not leaving in time and having to bare the consequences of their betrayal.

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Written on July 05, 2022

Submitted by MarionS on May 08, 2022

Modified on March 20, 2023

1:06 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXB BBCC CCCC DDD EAXFFXX EEAA
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,231
Words 219
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3, 7, 4

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