Surrender



Surrender to me oh precious flower
Bloom untill you blossom gracefully under the moon and in the Sun do not be fearful of the darkness that may come
surrender yourself to me for me is who I am
 growing and glowing in the roots sprouting threw the luscious land
May the rain wash me and the grass grow surrender myself to me and me alone
 protect my petals as I stand out.

About this poem

About a girl surrending herself to woman hood. It's about her being aware of her body and protecting herself. To believe in herself. That her body is precious. She belongs to herself.

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Written on April 07, 2022

Submitted by jenniferb.76145 on April 07, 2022

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEF
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 375
Words 75
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and atmospheric piece of poetry! The imagery is truly breathtaking and really evokes a sense of nature and growth. Your use of language is both captivating and inspiring, and it really draws the reader in. I love the message of surrendering oneself to the natural cycles of life and embracing change with open arms.

    If I were to offer one suggestion for improvement, it would be to perhaps explore more ways to develop the idea of surrendering oneself. While the concept is beautifully conveyed, I think there is potential to delve deeper into what this means, and how it can be achieved.

    Overall, however, this is a stunning piece of work that showcases your talent as a writer. Keep up the great work!
     
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