I'm afraid of loosing you..

Priyanka Das 2002 (Bihar)



She used to run and come to me,
Just to see I did any harm.

But now her bones are not in her favour ,
She can't pick me into her arms .

She used to feed me delicious pancakes
Full of honey on top ,

But now her eyesight are getting weaker ,
She don't even talk

Her pale face make me think of ,
Bare tree in Spring .

She is Losing her memory,
She doesn't even remember she gifted me a ring .

As fast as I'm growing her age is growing too,  I'm no more happy because., Mom! I'm afraid of losing you.

About this poem

It's about the feeling of a daughter who is watching her mom getting older and weaker

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Submitted by priyankad.53008 on April 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX BX XX BX XC AC X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 507
Words 116
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1

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