I am more!



I saw you as an Idol, obeyed you as a slave
In the dark, you were my candle-
The fire in you I have always craved.
You smiled, I blushed;
You touched me, I trembled;
You kissed me, I was rushed
With passion...nimble.
So bright, I believed you were the sun.
Just looking at you was so much fun!
I worshiped you believing you are the king;
In all I dreamed, you were my everything.
But your ego was so vaunted!
For you iwas bot an Idol, but a slave.
It wasn't my love that you wanted-
But my body you always craved!
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Written on 2001

Submitted by toniamari712 on April 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEDBFFGGHAIC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 514
Words 114
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

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