Yin Yang



When firstly the two commas,
One light the other heavy
(Each bearably part of the other
enjoined in a many-dimensional helix),
Joined in mutual attraction,
Like two sperm [or eggs with hair
if you prefer] of opposites,
The land paused to breathe
in the aroma of conception.

About this poem

OK, so call me a dolderhead or insert your favorite pet term of endearment that is not too effusively offensive, but I accepted the challenge to write a one-sentence poem that hopefully was not too terrible of a run-on, and that also treated the subject fairly yet lightheartedly. It also follows my own clay creation of a large comma with an exclamation point, a period, and a colon, which I reasoned would make do if that was all I could choose.

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Written on February 18, 2022

Submitted by ScottMPotter on May 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 276
Words 54
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9

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