The Pain You Don’t See



The Pain You Don't See:

The pain you don't see
Is the shattering pain
I feel over & over again

The pain you don't see
Is the voices inside my head
Telling me different ways to
Try it one day

The pain you don't see
Is the continuing mental images
I see everyday, all day

The pain you don't see
Is the hurt I feel for my family

The pain you don't see
Is that, inside I'm already dying

About this poem

In my darkest times is when I wrote this poem. I was battling suicide and a few days later right when I was about to attempt it, I called for help instead.

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Written on July 18, 2019

Submitted by EricaPeters on April 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A Axx Axxb Axb Aa Ax
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 390
Words 88
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 4, 3, 2, 2

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