My Thane



My Thane...

My Thane, my Thane how you dance amongst the living, gracing all with your wisdom and knowledge.

Seeking and wanting, like the moonrise and sunset; arching and dancing around in my mind's world. Never touching, always yearning.

Ice shatters, and you appear, commanding all in my mind. your words, they ebb and flow at my reality.

My feelings bend and sway. With each greeting
I don't understand why. Do you care the same?

Am I just a creation, or a fabrication
Am born to love or forced to believe in love?
 
Yet you're here, yet I have only seen your mask.
Your front, but your intentions are crystal.

I wish to run my hands over cloud, and touch the untouchable, hold my breath and seep into your body

Wanting, yearning, missing and wishing.

About this poem

This poem is written about someone I know. Who I'm close to.

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Written on April 24, 2022

Submitted by Vanadis on April 26, 2022

Modified on April 09, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X A B AX XX XX B A
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 763
Words 151
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1

Larien Evokai

Im a poet from Walsall in the Uk and I have always loved Poems and im using them as a way of coping with my mental health issues. I adore books, cats and coffee! :) more…

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