Brink Of Fine



I can only wish
To be let out of this horrid cage
I can only wish
To be classified as okay

I can only wish
To see my lovely again
I can only wish
I’ll be alive when the day ends

I can only wish
The med won’t kill my mind
Oh dear reader
I can only wish
To be on the brink of fine

About this poem

I'm on a new AdHd medication. I'm struggling with the fact it makes me angry.

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Submitted by Sproutheadedhurt on April 25, 2022

Modified by Sproutheadedhurt on May 12, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AxAx AxAx AxxAx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 288
Words 71
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5

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