Raw



Sinful sweet dear darling we are coming to the edge now,

Filled with love life and luster we are thrown into the pit once again

Downward delusional mastery the artwork

Never in a day so swayed to suffer through this tornado blissful oblivion

So radiant so pure so raw so heart with every breath beat

The blood moon she's risen

That scent oh yes it carries me

Drifting into the abyss and in heaven

Drowning in thy misery yet healing from the precious moments

Those precious moments I hold so dear

Please beloved don't let me down now

Your everything I am

Your all that I love

Let's do the dance on Saturn's ring

Kiss the universes cunt and open up the door

Send ripples through the multiverse and break down the barrier

Never have I loved a being more

Let's dance for all eternity instead of settling the score

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Written on April 23, 2022

Submitted by Teqnique on April 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A X X B X B X B X X A X X X C X C C
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 829
Words 171
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Brandon Gregory

I have wrote poetry for many years. Life and a loss of will to make pieces halted me from writing for some time. Though now I am coming back in force. more…

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