Hugging the noble soul



She wakes up during the hour of god
and purifies her soul with holy water,
slowly take a walk near her
peaceful resting potter.

There are many clones inside her
who hugs and protects her every now and then,
She lets her soul fly in vision
provided by creator of men.

Her bending of whole to see the near truth
gives patience and calmness to her vitality

She has seen everything inside her
has so many roles to play
Her soul is plain and moist
only love can come out from her remains

Letting go and keeping things
are making her strong and pious,
Her adventures surely belongs to her
which preserve in her intuitive copious

Graves speaks to her in the most lovely tones
She meets so many beautiful souls without body
under a graceful yellow ball

This is the peaceful joy
something will giver her own place in this world:)

About this poem

This poem is my personal journey which I wrote in cemetery. Ist paragraph: I wake up at 5 am to discover myself and take a bath which feels like holy water and then go to my bed where I do meditation. 2nd paragraph: In her meditative state she sees so many like her- one who helps her with money, one herself who helps her emotionally and others who seek joy in riding. She sees so many of her hugs her and she hugs herself thinking who is helping her with current situation. 3rd paragraph: Now she is doing yoga( bending of whole) and postures teach her patience and discover her vitality She is a daughter, sister, friend and many roles but she tried to keep her soil(soul) out of all negative emotions and kept only love. Only love will come out from her dead body too because she didn’t plant anything else. 5th paragraph: She is learning what thoughts to keep and go. Her adventures are getting stored in her mind which she will use for meditation 6th paragraph: As I am writing this poem in cemetery so all graves are speaking to her under the sun( yellow ball) 7th paragraph: She wants only peaceful joy now and hopefully get a resting peace in world too. 

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Submitted by bhawnaim92 on April 23, 2022

Modified by bhawnaim92 on April 23, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAAA ABXB XC AXXX XDAD XCX XX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 828
Words 166
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2, 4, 4, 3, 2

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