Waiting



I seek for you in all places,
But none it seems have been right.
I think I might have seen you once,
It was a dark pure moon lit night.
I watched longingly as you passed me by.
I was struck by the power of your light.
I wish I could have touched your warmth,
But the timing just was not right.
I Hope one day you'll pass me again,
So I might take my chance at fate.
I pray you will still be shining my love,
Stuck in never if you’re not late.

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i wrote it at a difficult time, it helped me through a moment

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Written on January 01, 2005

Submitted by TearsOnTheInside on April 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBDBEBFGHG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 445
Words 105
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

TearsOnTheInside

I wrote this poem at a time in my life when I was in a bad place mentally, everything I didn't want to be and poetry was the fastest way I could see change physically and believe I could be a better person if I tried. more…

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