Take me away



every day the sun seems to shine a little less
trying to put my life together but its just a big mess
my heart seems so heavy
my heart seems so tainted
and i cant repaint it
im out of money
im out of luck
my eyes are dry
and im in a maze that i cant solve
i wish i could eat a piece of cake
but its just a fake
i cant take it anymore

the pain chews on my soul
im lost as a whole
inside me a big hole
that i cannot fill
oh why am i pouring all this energy on this mask
i wish i could drink from that green flask
perish away peacefully
im tired of it all

Cant be honest to no one else
cause anyone close just melts
im tired of it all
playing like a broken record
playing a tragic story over and over again
a story no one wants to listen

i wish i was never in the make
my soul must be a mistake
i should perish while i can
because when its too late
i might become a madman
Take me away

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A poem in dark times

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Written on April 16, 2022

Submitted by ibek on April 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme aabxxbxxxccx dddxeebF xxFxxx ccgxgx
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 887
Words 199
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 12, 8, 6, 6

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