MY INFERNO - 2



I just finished
My first blunt
As the sun
Has risen to it's
Peak
I'm thinking
It’s time to head
Back
I jump in the truck
And smile
I have another one
To smoke
Or spark up
Before I get back
Home

"PARADISE LOST"

I switch my tunes
Over to
Bob Marley and Lauren Hill
Turn your lights down low
And pull out of the parking lot
I'm seeing a lot
Of traffic on the road
People are finally
Waking up
The joggers
Are getting their miles in
I'm getting blazed
And
It's getting hot

"PARADISE LOST"

I get to my turn off
To head home
Off of the island
And
I’m thinking
I still have
A half of blunt
Left to smoke
I pause for moment
Damn
Let’s push it
So I turn the truck
And continue to head
To North Siesta Key

"PARADISE LOST"
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Written on April 14, 2022

Submitted by DerrickECarey on April 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 15, 14, 14

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