Watery Creature

Scott Michael Potter 1966 (Grand Rapids, MI)



Changing skin for clothes
and rending teeth for toothy smiles
a wedding soon ensues to treasure.
Skin secreted in hidden chest awhiles
where hearts beat much less
but whose pounding for fear of founding
leave detectable scents nonetheless
eventually find their winding way bestows
a replacing of haranguing clothes.
Children? Home? Husband? Culture?
All is shed for free watery pleasure…

--by Scott Michael Potter

About this poem

Mermaids are not nearly as docile in most cultures as they are portrayed most often today: singing lovely songs, which is the job of Sirens, and brushing their long hair, more likely Rapunzel; and instead, in rare cases they came to shore out of a longing for a normal life, wed a suitable adoring male and had a child as a loving wife, only to then disappear abruptly when the call of the sea, their original home, was too great; and in most cultures, they simply ate sailors ravenously after they fell overboard in choppy seas, or devoured young children who frolicking onshore foolishly got too close to the dangerous water despite parental warnings. The enstorying below entails the more peaceful variety, but does not complete it, for that is the job of another poem, poet, or reader to accomplish, that of the child leaving home to transform into a Mer-being once puberty strikes, thereby abandoning the distraught husband and father. 

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Written on February 18, 2022

Submitted by ScottMPotter on April 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBACXCXABB B
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 416
Words 68
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 1

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