The Bird Queen

Brady Bowen 1973 (Louisiana)

March 22 


The gentle touch of fingertips
On the outside of my arm
As the sun crawls over the windowsill
Plasmatic molasses
Lighting our togetherness
In the chilled predawn of possibility
That lovers waste on pleasures

Her whispers invade, auditory amphibious
Soldiers; this beach is mine
They cry, in porcelain fragility
But although she is like the daisy
Her petals are razors, whetted by trial
But they are petals still

I miss the curve of her ankle
Erotic geometry
Eyes of Tenerife, ethereal
Spun gold threads hang;
A crown.

About this poem

For Jenny

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Written on March 13, 2021

Submitted by BradyB999 on March 14, 2022

Modified on April 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAXBCX BXCCAA ACAXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 533
Words 103
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 5

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