Paradise?



One thing that
I want to know is
what would we do
what would we do if we could do anything
what would we do
what would we do with forever
what would we do
I mean would we
what would the top choice be
of something to do
forever
it is an interesting question
I heard some dude
on the internet
back in the day
and it stuck with me
what he said about it
and he said that
what we would do forever in paradise
would be to deflower virgins
or to be a virgin
and continuously deflowered
swarming forever in paradise
the very moment
of the loss of virginity
or the disposal of it
in penetration
at the climax of a passion
representing the acme (apogee)
of pure being
penetration and explosive disruption
of the hymen
as ultimate existential possibility
but what is it then
if not that
what
shall we do with forever
what have they come up with so far
apart from that
how is it supposed to feel
eternal life and paradise if you will
now don’t get me wrong
I am just asking
and there is nothing wrong with that.

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A speculation regarding paradise.

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Written on May 03, 2022

Submitted by anthony_absurd on March 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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