if sleep is death being shy



when you sleep it's like you never cried,

breathing soft and steady, wet cheeks dried.

 

when you sleep it's like you never lost,

boundaries weren't broken and lines weren't crossed.

 

when you sleep it's like you're still there,

and you still smile and you still care.

 

when you sleep you look young as i,

no crease in your brow and no old worn sigh.

 

and so if sleep is death just being shy,

is it still so wrong,

to wish

to die?

About this poem

The poet is trying to describe how death is merely an event of nature and human emotions don't usually matter in the bigger picture, we are just a part of the great trail of nature.

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Written on January 11, 2020

Submitted by abhishek_c on March 10, 2022

Modified on March 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A B B C C D D D X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 448
Words 111
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Abhishek Chaudhary

Abhishek Chaudhary A.K.A TheAbbie born in 2002 is a computer engineer from Fr. Conceicao Rodrigues institute of technology, and he made he acting and writing debut in 2019 short film Brazen Epiphany, The film was made as a part of India Film project 50 hour filmmaking challenge. He is currently writing for TVF sketches. He also currently makes YouTube videos. Apart from acting and writing, his main fields of interests include programming and photography and podcasting more…

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