13th reason in action



Dark clouds fill the sky, taking away the sunshine
Day turns to night, and that smiles starts to fade
Tonight's the night you've made up your mind
Your leaving tonight and not coming back
People are losing but you may gain
That fake smile will be no more
An after life awaits for you
Say goodbye for the last time

It starts on the bridge, high from the ground
And ends in the water, that rushes below
You leave this world, the perfect weather
Your body afloats, the blood gushes out
The water is red, and bubbles float up
Your life is no more, but not to worry
There's more beyond the void
The after life is yours to take cause
You've said goodbye for the last time  

About this poem

TW: Suicide its about someone that has been wanting to end it all, and they finally did it

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Written on March 28, 2022

Submitted on April 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXXXXXA XXXXXXXXA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 671
Words 132
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 9

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