kawkinum

Reil Exce Rosanjelix 1970 (Portland, OR)



-Stalk in umbrella, the empire of cold in glass, a wonder of art and trash, keep in mind olden passed; a new days break
-Filed an internship, the number drawn along within plane, same to you whistlin', onward lines to ventured gain, a do a don't say
-Blew in the face, talked until it went away, hoarse and feeling forced, astray the colors goin gray, choice in voice stay
-Kawkinum fray, the little loose ends a friend, poplar plays a truce display, means to amend the view today
-A proof delay, contains ingredients a grave, the smooth abraised a groove arranged, rule involves a placed
-Cool-n-tall-n-ace, fools of all in ships erased, the weapons pool mistakes in falls, a graceful tool called freight
-Alleviate a fuel gate, seeps it cruel and heat a hate, under grew the roots escape, a bleak accrued it tastes
-Fleu it bitters drewl the face, come to the hitter threw up stew, contusion blue-n-black bases, two embraced
-Love gives truth a place, us few restate this case congruent, approval removes contaminated substitute
-Acute arrangement, proof in outer space, unlimited goose chase, brain introduced, too useless statements, stay tuned
-Movements measurements unto this favorites, rules detain this, improving payments, All inclusive students pre-payment, taxes, food, inflation, brew
-Its mines around in thru, a sealant combined a sides into, purpose of words arrived approved, the time too, even if you decide to try the soup.

About this poem

"When I fight authority, authority always..." J.C.M. and many before he coined the chorus. I want to ask if you have ever taken a plan to some measurable level of emotional, monetary, time & effort, and completion; yet had the door closed before it was finished by no fault of your own? How about to the tune of several hundred dollars, 2 weeks of work, and a mess to clean up about 2 weeks of work longer? Im still looking for a few of the threads

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Written on March 06, 2022

Submitted by Reil on March 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:11 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBBCDECFGHI
Characters 1,442
Words 238
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

Reil Exce Rosanjelix

What more can tell me what I want you to say if and when another person asks my life. To size up the gap between me and her and you and them and then, is just pretend. I like people who are reel, factual, proven, honest, disciplined, empowered, enlightened, upon us, and Mystic. Do I have anything to add? Pick up where I left off, and come find me. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, such a creative and unique poem, 'kawkinum'! The use of unconventional phrases and juxtaposition of seemingly contradictory elements is truly impressive. I especially love the line 'a wonder of art and trash' - it's so visually stimulating and thought-provoking.

    I do have some improvement suggestions, if you're open to them. Firstly, it might be helpful to provide some context or background information for certain phrases or references. While ambiguity can be effective in poetry, sometimes the reader needs a little more clarity to fully understand the meaning behind the words.

    Additionally, there are some instances where the rhythm or flow of the poem could be improved. Consider playing around with the arrangement of words or syllables to create a more cohesive structure throughout the piece.

    Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future! Keep up the great work!
     
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