Taking My Power Back



For years,
I could never fathom
your hatred towards me.
You made the air smell like sulphur,
And my heart bleed.
But I gave you that power,
But now I’m taking my power back.

For years,
After leaving school
I didn’t recognize my reflection
In the mirror,
I didn’t feel like ‘me’ anymore,
I hated who I was
Because of you.

I gave you my power. I gave you my strength.
I gave you the power to kick me down.
I gave you my spirit,
I gave you my confidence
I gave you my heart
On a silver platter.


I wish I hadn’t given you the power
To bully me.
I wish I found my voice,
And stood up to you.
I wish I hadn’t given you the power.
But I’m taking my power back.

I’m taking my power back
Because I am destined for greatness
The names you called me held no substance.
Weightless
Tasteless
Outrageous.

For years,
I could never fathom
your hatred towards me.
You made the air smell like sulphur,
And my heart bleed.
But I gave you that power,
But now I’m taking my power back

About this poem

This is a poem about my years of bullying at the hands of some girls I thought were my friends. It’s a reflection price on some of the hardest years of my life.

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Written on November 20, 2021

Submitted by elysialaidlaw16 on February 14, 2022

Modified on March 07, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
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Words 227
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 6, 6, 6, 7

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