Death's Hand



The stench of illness fills the air.
Death lingers by my side,
Waiting for my demise.
His putrid breath upon my shoulder.
Tears stream down gloomy faces.
Metamorphosis!
Sad faces contort to something wicked,
Hatred finding a scapegoat to blame.
Deception fills the room.
I gasp for air in disappointment.
The loud sounds of bickering.
The deafening of finger pointing.
The blaring of my once close family falling apart.
I scream, “I’m still here!”.
No one listens over the loudness of hate.
With misery on my heart,
Removing myself from all the false we call life,
From all the backbiting and accusing.
I gleefully take death’s hand.

About this poem

I wrote this poem when my grandmother was ill in the hospital on life support. My aunt and uncles argued about finances and petty things, I've seen this too many times and it hurt my soul.

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Written on March 08, 2021

Submitted by blanca170921 on February 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKKLMNLOKP
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 641
Words 126
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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