YOU Are NOT my friend

Terri Davis 1971 (Ferndale)

January 22 


You are NOT my friend
In the middle of the night, you came
My body-I could not defend

You are like a pool of darkness
A mutated black cloud
You invade and steal rest

While you keep your stay...
Smiles and joy diminishes
While those around you try to be brave

You are not my friend
I do not want you here
This is not how life is to be spent

With every step in the door
I extinguish you from my life
Now and forever more

You must NOT come back
At any time, any shape or form
I beg you, lose my track

Your name must not be heard
This is my prayer
That you may be gone for good!

About this poem

Written for my dear friend, Sonya who got cancer. She had been an activist for years to help others, and then one gloomy day, she too, heard the devastating words, "You have cancer."

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Written on November 11, 2013

Submitted by PrincessT214 on January 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axa xxx xxx Axx bxb cxc xxx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 580
Words 129
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

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