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Obscurity

Laurie A ONeil 1964 (Hawaii)

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Clouds hung softly in silence, huddled between a distant dream and the glare of an endless reality
The emptiness of life’s sorrow flicker past our eyes, regret cannot change the truth, as we bury secrets in the garden of desire
Gently, the wind blows, we listen to its whisper, the message is clear
Searching, I find you standing high upon fraught mountain, together we jump…into Obscurity

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This poem was first published around 2002.

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Written on January 01, 2002

Submitted by laurie.oneil396 on January 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 393
Words 66
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
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