I Heard the Creep



There it is, the slightest shuffle, I know I've heard it albeit muffled.

It must be the creep. I know he's here. He's never far, and now he's near.

The night seems darker than I've ever known,
my eyes wading thru a velvet curtain,
another creak, even closer now,
And I am absolutely certain.

I must not breathe so loudly,
The creep will surely hear.
But a louder breath from wretched lungs
Wheezes towards my ear.

I see long twisted fingers
Gnarled like roots of an ancient tree.

I see sunken eyes
that seem to stare secretly at me.

I see crooked teeth
Chipped and bent beckoning to flee.

I see the creep
The smell makes me weak and dizzy in my head.

This is it. I proclaim.
Death looming at the bed.

I smile once and only once,
And cut off the sleeping creeps head.

I fall to my knees, the deed is done
But all that I can see.

Is blurring sight and darkest night
The creep was always me.
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Written on January 09, 2022

Submitted by dante_unknown on January 09, 2022

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X XAXA BCXC XB XB XB XD XD XD AB XB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 900
Words 202
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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  • johnc.22519
    A disappointing, negative ending for me, Dante. I suspect you are paying too much attention to the opinions of unhelpful people around you. I suggest that you rise above them and apply your ability to write something as thoughtful but with an outward-looking ending. Best wishes John 
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