AFTER YOU LEFT ME



I have waited for you like the sky waiting for the moon.
As I could not find you.
My heart could not tolerate vented my feelings in a song.

You there and me here.
Pain here and your word there.
Heart is the one that combines us always.
These flowers as your smiles.
These stars as your eyes.
These tender blooming buds as your cheeks.
I imagined and excitingly.
I wrote and sent a musical letter to you.. please come my love!

I have waited for you like the sky waiting for the moon.
As I could not find you.. my heart could not tolerate. and vented my feelings in a song.

Your name become a prayer chant to me.
Loving you became my meditation.
Thinking of you became a blessing always.
You are somewhere but not here with me.
I am here but non-existent without you.
You are manifestation of my future disappointments.
Though you are far but you are at my side.
I am your shadow that never leaves.
You own everything I have.

I have waited for you like the sky waiting for the moon.
As I could not find you.. my heart could not tolerate. and vented my feelings in a song.

About this poem

The whole context is about Love breakup and After love break. How can a guy suffer himself. and express with his own painful words.

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Written on September 01, 2022

Submitted by mamthakp540 on January 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Abc xxdxxxxx AC exdebxxxx AC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,073
Words 233
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 8, 2, 9, 2

Mamathashree K P

Mamathashree KP From - India Location - Bangalore DOB - 01/08/1997 Age - 24 Education - MBA Occupation - Accountant . more…

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