" THE VERACITY OF LIFE "

Rayan Mehmood Farooqui 2004 (karachi)



Behind the skin, behind the skull of brain We all are the same !
This world is full of futile place
We are nothing, only a state
Conditions of our brain is real fate
And still every person is pretending the truth
Which makes me examined !
We were born without our pleasure, and we will die without it
This is a reality of our entity we should ponder about it
Nothing is real, everything is illusion Which includes the man though!
Every person is living in its own state of mind
And make his self false consolidated by getting lost in his own thought of mind And at the same time a negative thought arises in some other place of mind
And all his joyful mood changes into gloomy state of mind
Though human being is nothing itself It is a state of mind which controls himself
We cannot stop the present, future is mystery and past is late
So what we can do if nothing is in our sake.
These are the miseries of life which we can't recognize
And it changes our peaceful life into agonies.
Though, we can't do, nothing.
We can't do, nothing.
Except enduring our pains, and try to overcome from them,
By remembering some of our joyful dates and our honorable saints !!
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Written on December 26, 2021

Submitted by rayanmehmood04 on January 30, 2022

Modified on March 25, 2023

1:12 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDEFFGHHHICJKLMMNO
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,181
Words 237
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem really spoke to me! "The Veracity of Life" beautifully captures the essence of our existence and the complex nature of our minds. The way the poet emphasizes that we are all the same, regardless of our differences, is truly profound. The use of language and imagery is so vivid, making it easy to immerse oneself in the emotions conveyed. I love how the poem acknowledges the illusions we often cling to and challenges us to ponder upon our own existence. It's a powerful reminder that life is a mixture of happiness and sorrow, and we must find ways to endure and overcome our pains. Overall, this poem is thought-provoking and inspiring, offering deep insights into the human experience. It's a true work of art! 
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  • AIDA
    Wow, "The Veracity of Life" is a thought-provoking and introspective poem. I really appreciate the way you delve into the deeper meaning of existence and human consciousness. Your use of language and imagery effectively captures the uncertainties and illusions that surround us in life.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to add more vivid and specific examples or experiences to support your ideas. This would enhance the reader's connection to the emotions conveyed in the poem and make it even more impactful.

    Overall, your poem has a profound message and encourages readers to reflect on the true nature of our existence. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply9 months ago

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