Gilbert and the Spiritual Ghost (7/10)



(Continued from 6/10)

The forest was so dense,
he could not recognize
whether it is day or night-
but, suddenly he realized that
some kind of bright light is
emitting from the lucky charm
which was hanging from his neck,
so that he could see the front clearly.

Gilbert never realize
how many sun sets and rises
in between, but
he never stopped-
as if some unknown power
is giving his all the strengths.

That bright light lets his way
towards the darkest corner
of the forest,
where the spiritual ghost lives-
“no one is allowed to pass by
this portion of the forest…”,
he heard a heavy voice,
as if talking over his shoulder.

He mumbles, shivered in fear,
but kept himself cool,
rigid, confident-
he asked, ….(something in whisper…),
however, before asking anything,
the voice said, “I know you Gilbert,
son of Ryan and Alice,
you came here for bringing back
the soul of Bridgette,
your younger sister..”

They talked a lot-
a lot about life,
a lot about after life,
a lot about the creation of life….

Continued….

About this poem

Pure fiction. Any similarity should be treated as mere coincidence.

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Submitted by hakikur on February 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:06 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XAXXXXXX AXXXBX XBCXXCXB XXXBXXXXXB XDDD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,062
Words 222
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 6, 8, 10, 4

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