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Vago imerso no espaço que me deixas

Renato Sakate 1978 (Botucatu)

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Vago imerso no espaço que me deixas
perdido em devaneios salutares
banido de teu seio em meus lugares,
cego e inquieto no paço das candeias

Antevejo o Futuro, teus olhares
respirando profano em mil madeixas
habitando cigano sob tuas queixas
penso sobre teu queixo, entre os molares.

Então que me transporte ao seu destino
nesses dias de céu claro e noites boêmias,
nas noites de lua nova e sol a pino!

Para que seja enfim, parte da essência
sabor da calmaria e d’um novo agito
que me remeteu aos pés desta alma gêmea.
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Written on 2013

Submitted by on January 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAA AAAA BAB XXX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 530
Words 100
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3
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