Um Astrolábio a Menos

Renato Sakate 1978 (Botucatu)



Em sua presença o desconforto é ameno
tal qual lanterna que ilumina os mares
E a protegê-la tanto estou a remar
que neste barco é o coração, meu remo.

É num segundo se me vêm milhares
se neste amor há mais que o céu terreno
Porque o seu lábio é um astrolábio a menos
e a minha bússola são os seus olhares.

Então primeiro, o sinaleiro avisa
e a brisa fresca em meus pulmões assento.
Vem a esperança e sinto a terra à vista!

Desembarcando em verdes margens, sento
E me contento em frenesi à conquista
visto o que Deus nos prometeu aos centos!
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Written on 2003

Submitted by on January 25, 2022

Modified on April 30, 2023

33 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXX BABB BCC CCB
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 563
Words 111
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3

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