Empty feeling

Cameron Holt 2000 (Indiana)



Words I don’t know,
I’m staring at the sky,
A long time come,
Tons of days and nights,

Secrets they hold,
Sunny skies, bright blue,
Dual revolutions,
I’m thinking about you

Without the words,
Dark skies, dark blue,
No more wasting time,
I’m missing you
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Written on January 23, 2022

Submitted by Cameronholt17 on January 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XAXA XAXA
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 264
Words 58
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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