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Desperation Before Death

ted s owens 1949 (SC)

In violent fields, no eye is on the sparrow.
It flits amidst the rage of sling and arrow.
And though to it, no refuge calls,
Still, it beats its wing until to earth it falls a breathless thing.
How frail a thread holds hope above the fray.
Too soon it yields to weight of mortal wound.
And sparrows lie in fields like buds that never bloom.

About this poem

This poem is based on my experience in Vietnam. It's about the feelings of nakedness and exposure when there's nowhere to hide during an attack. Actual death is the easy part.

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Written on January 02, 2022

Submitted by BU3 on January 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABCDEF
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 341
Words 73
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
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