Dark Daze



What a beautiful disaster
Matter destroyed by a phenom
Sanitized with Jack Daniel's
Baptized with sqeezed lemons

There's some truth in jest
And information in zero
A victim that cries
To a dead silent hero

Oh karma please see me
With your all mighty eye
Give thanks to the heavens
And justice a sty

Takes one to know one
When push comes to shove
Dig a little bit deeper
And rise from above

The yang asked the djinn
For his perfect desire
Yins heart was removed
The devils always a liar

The gambler prays for good luck
And mercy in heaven
Kisses the dice and then rolls
Snake eyes or seven

About this poem

Quite deep. Personal experience and inside metaphors. Double edged swords and puns that are made to be [sic]. A bit negative in hopes of the positive effect of negative reinforcement. Shout out to Pavlov.

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Submitted by dlockstadt on January 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXB XCXC XDBD EFAF EAXA XEXE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 593
Words 116
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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