BLACK



When I was born, I heard a lot of voices
Mesmerised, I looked around towards the voices.

So many voices I heard around me,
Sometimes loving, sometimes angry surrounded me.

To understand I stretched to feel,
Sometimes hot, sometime cold and sometimes pain I would feel.

While growing I tried walking but fell,
Around me in the environment I tried to gel.

I got up, tried to run though fell on many things,
Every bruise and pain to myself stings.

Holding hands, I took my lively steps,
Those hands protected me with no more trips.

Comforting was the warmth of caring hands,
Gave me courage to explore life’s new lands.

Growing up I struggled to keep up the pace
Confused my thoughts, lost in a haze.

Confined to my room I would always wonder
Scared my wits whenever there was rain and thunder.

People said the world is full of colour,
For some reason, black was always my colour.

God, they said you are very kind,
Tell me, what was my fault, why did you make me blind?

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We get scared when we hear something but cannot see. What about....

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Written on May 01, 2015

Submitted by Vir on January 18, 2022

Modified on March 19, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB CC DD EE XX FF XX GG GG HH
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 978
Words 206
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

Viresh Bhatnagar

Born and brought up in India, I was lucky to attend a convent school where English teachers taught. I developed interest in English language as we used to do Shakespear dramas. I am now settled in the UK. Once I saw a policeman trying to get lift to go home on a festival to be with his family. It really touched my heart and I decided that whenever anything touches my heart, I will put it down in words of my own. more…

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  • Abhatnagar10
    In a dark room, this is quite Eye-opening! :)
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