Cave Rites



flesh palm filled with memories.

cocoa and
coffee, a somber outlook:

silent rooms,
rethinking the vibrant minx, a
fantasy the love is easier;

on wooden
floors, like leaping grasshoppers,  

cathedrals.

speaking gibberish,
cursing myself, the ocean behind  
eyes: warm waters, flushed  
testimony, hacking up ghosts.

an orange

cigar, spontaneous joy, sitting in
sins.

I
saw grape eyes, inner confinement,
inductive existence:

garden diets,
infested furs, memories and
wonders:
 
sudden appeal, if Love is
therapy,

if insanity is partial:

polyamorous
lifestyles, or monogamous fury,
making
excuses for non-social traits; most
playful

gem, an astute lawyer, myriad
deliberations.

(I feel recruited, like
cosmic laughter, outlandish
enough to
amble closer):

trekking through marsh,
filtering through wisdom, a
lonely
man
is a

smarting man.

it dies that way, peering
at wilderness, self-involved
he
can’t fly.  

to have an ailment; to have a
song; to flute with insistence:
casual
pains, choking on heaviness,
appalled

by impetuosity.

the rowing to land, the
rafted heartbeat, the persistence
of
make-believe: women writing,
scribbling fierce verses, gambling
for a fitted love. that palm of
goosegrass, the tale

about eating wood, the living love
adventure:

freelance poets, the
creative linguists, cymbals
becoming irritations;

as thought the
ache, if but for healing,

perfect our patience to exist;
 
a ship of senses, the
tale of escapades, the backstage
pass, a whit exciting.  

It was
furious passion, thought to feel
love, the purely instructive
mansion:

never so beautiful, the perfect
scarf, a silken suit—
inner gravity, a tugging heart,
deep enchantment.
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Written on January 16, 2022

Submitted by on January 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A BX XCD EF GXXX XX HIJ XBF XK L AKMXL XN XGXD XCKXC MXKH CJLAX CJOMMOX OD CXN CM X CXM XXXE XXXI
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,758
Words 352
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 3, 2, 4, 2, 3, 3, 2, 1, 5, 2, 4, 5, 4, 5, 7, 2, 3, 2, 1, 3, 4, 4

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