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Father's touch

Florin Dragos Minculescu 1978 (România)

I've turned myself to touch The Self,
Madly wanting to make It mine.
Oh, that silly was the me!

But deep within I've found a Child,
Fatherless and Motherless it was The Child.
I've searched The Eye to comfort Him,
But I've fall in love on to His Heart.

The Father touched the heart of Child.
And then there's NoThing.
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Written on January 12, 2022

Submitted by d.minculescu on January 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX AAXX AX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 322
Words 71
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 2
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Florin Dragos Minculescu

Once upon the time I had a friend and his name was Me. I and Me were indissoluble friends, he was I' s world. One day, Me decided to go in search of self and at one point disappeared. I is better now without him. Me was anxious, scared and had a lot of wishes and opinions about everything. Now, that Me is gone, I has discovered a peace that it didn't know it existed. more…

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