Sun & the moon



Among the stars that have a different birth…
Climbing heaven and gazing on the earth…
I stand next to the stream of dawn and gaze at the sunrise,
Rayon of lights glowing through my eyes…

Cool breeze flowing through my body…
The same feeling I get when you are beside me…
Your simple presence enlightens my darkest atmosphere;
And with your touch, sends my soul into another stratosphere.

Like the sun and the moon, across the mountain and sea…
I start to glow when your bright smile shines upon me.
We’re so far apart when we aren’t touching lips…
And whenever we do…it’s like a solar eclipse.

Along the beach holding each others hands,
All night long we go marching, feet in the sand;
Reaching for the stars to catch a glimpse of the Milky Way…
Holding you dear, keeping you warm and safe…

Always

About this poem

Teenage dreamer living his youth years....

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Written on June 09, 2006

Submitted by edilions on January 12, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD CCEE XXXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 828
Words 156
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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