Oh god, Oh god

Yogya Bhatia 2008 (Hospital)



Sometimes i feel this world is so great
But then i think there are also many things to hate
Oh god oh god you gave us fine air
But water and diamond are so rare
Oh god oh god you gave us bright sun
But the UV rays will make us run
Sorry god sorry god for all that i am and will speak
Don’t punish me,because I am already very weak.
Oh god oh god you gave us food to eat
I wish i could spell my wand “abo cabo” and get some more avocado
Oh god oh god you gave us land to walk
But i wish it could expand
Oh god oh god you gave us mouth to speak
But I have to stop now cuz I have a very talkative streak.
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Submitted by Yogya on January 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDDEFGHDD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 611
Words 141
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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