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Eruption

Rebekah Zimmerman 2005

Narrative
Trouble brewing,
Beneath the surface.
A mistake made,
was his wrongdoing.
An apology rejected,
Was her reaction.
No communication,
Was their qualification.
Things unaddressed,
Were their distress.
Anger, bitterness, and hate,
Were their fate.
Finally, it blew up,
And their relationship was abrupt.

About this poem

This poem addresses the problem between two people. It shows what might happen if relationship problems are unaddressed.If relationship problems are unaddressed, it is likely that the problem will get worse and worse until an eruption happens in which case, the relationship is likely to end.

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Written on December 30, 2021

Submitted by on January 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCADEEEFGHHIJ
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 305
Words 57
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
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