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Tipping point

Rena Emi Asano 1999 (Hawaii)

[Dream: A wish of the heart while in slumber]

Standing at the edge of dreams and reality
I thought I knew where I wanted to be
Until I awoke from my slumber deep
And found that dreams were not mine to keep
A wish of the heart now dimming fast
Soon a mere mist just eluding my grasp
When the dawn breaks I’ll rise again
But does a dream die when I leave the bed?
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Written on August 23, 2021

Submitted by emirena99 on December 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X AABBXXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 366
Words 78
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 8
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