The silent disciple (Part-4/5)



On his way towards the
black mountain
where the monster took shelter
he met another dedicated monk
whom he accompanied to
reach his destination.

By the way
the silent disciple feels
inside his heart that
the dedicated monk is very near to his heart
(in fact both were brothers in
their early lives and the blood bond
to them together again),
and they decided to fulfill their destiny.

The dedicated monk
in one of his early life
has done many sinful walks
and he has also taken a solemn vow
to destroy any obstruction to humankind.

Hence, both of them
took another new vow
to kill the monster
so that the humanity prevail
in this universe;
so all those good fairies.

Contd…

About this poem

Pure fiction. Any similarity should be treated as mere coincidence.

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Submitted by hakikur on December 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABCXA XXXXXXXX CXXDX XDBXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 700
Words 151
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 8, 5, 6

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