War of Kaleidoscope



Your eyes are dark, yet heavenly
It immensely flutters my heart
Voice so smooth like I was listening to a melody
It gives me butterflies so hard.

Your smiles make my days bright
Arms of yours keep me warm in cold nights
Complete me always with your endless kisses
and us to be together is one of my wishes.

You ruled my heart completely
and your existence complete me,
You saved me from the sorrow
and gave me love like there's no tomorrow.

You don't know how much I love you, darling,
even God doesn't know how much I adore you smiling
How I wish you could see it through my eyes,
so please, let me love you until the sun would no longer rise.

About this poem

This poem is about expressing love and butterflies on the stomach. I came up with the idea of Kaleidoscope because scientifically, a group of butterflies called Kaleidoscope. And war because the butterflies were always getting wild that it feels like they were having a war every time a person gets flustered. I found it cute and that's basically it. This is the second poem I've written, I'm still a beginner and I don't know what I am doing, so please bare with me. Or much better if you educate me, I would gladly appreciate that :>>

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Written on November 26, 2021

Submitted by vienne_e on November 26, 2021

Modified by vienne_e on November 26, 2021

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAX XXXX AABB CCDD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 648
Words 135
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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