White

Ciel Matienzo 1996 (Sorsogon)



When we first time to meet up
I saw you and my eyes started to light up
You look like an angel fallen from the sky
And then I started to feel high

We became friends and started to be comfortable
As the days passed I notice you're being humble
A young, happy, and wanted the days to be unforgettable
And that's the day I realized that you're unbelievable.

Since we are apart from different cities.
We notice that were close as we are so witty.
We communicate like there's no worry.
But I know one day this happy shits will be just a memory.

As the days passed we are so happy.
We love to hangout us alone like Spongebob and Garry.
We-vibe, we dive, we laugh, we look at each other silently.
As our eyes meet, we communicate like we're in a galaxy.

And suddenly you became quiet,
Cold, tight, and not that excite.
You started it with "choose white"
And you ended it with "this is not right".

About this poem

Having someone that can't be yours.

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Written on November 07, 2021

Submitted by cielmtnz18 on November 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCCC XDDD DDDD XEEE
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 893
Words 186
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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