Airing Out



I fling open the window  
To let the cool, clean air in
Or the stifling, stale air out

Sometimes the brisk draft is uncomfortable
Depending on which way the wind blows
I squirm, I smile, I grimace

Each breeze against my skin
Inhale the stagnant
Or celebrate the freshness

It’s Nature, sloughing off dust
Fumes, chemicals transferring
My atmosphere – my life

I keep the window open
Like a stern soldier warding off evil
I cherish my existence

For me to inhale warm or cool –
Breezy – rustling or in silence
Can’t you feel the change in the air?

You, I, we – simply, automatically breathe
Who has time to analyze the gasses?
Amazing – the power of air and water!

Just a little penetrating draft and
Our perception and thought soon modified
I know I can’t keep the window open forever
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Submitted by arthurweil on November 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAX BXC AXC XXX XBD XDX XXE XXE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 812
Words 162
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

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