It Was Just Too Good

Elise Nickel 2010 (Springfield)



I have devoured
All the large cinnamon rolls
In the roll bowl

You’ve probably been dreaming
Of eating the world’s largest
Roll out of the
Big, fat bowl
I know you hate it when you don’t receive
The largest roll out of the bowl

I hope you forgive me.
They were so delicious and so creamy
I could taste the gooeyness and freshly baked
Rolls scurrying down my body

About this poem

This poem is about me and my siblings trying to figure out who will figure out who will get the biggest cinnamon roll out of the bowl.

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Written on November 18, 2021

Submitted by elisenickel2028 on November 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXA XXXAXA BBXB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 375
Words 77
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 6, 4

Elise Nickel

My name is Elise Nickel and I live in Ozark, Missouri. I am in 6th grade. I got the motivation to make this poem because I was thinking about making a poem about food and I thought about cinnamon rolls since me and my older 2 and younger siblings always debate on who's going to get the largest cinnamon roll all the time. I haven't written very many poems and I probably won't make a ton like some poets, but this is just for fun while I am interested in it for a little bit. I truly hope that a lot of people will love my newly created poem since I spent a lot of time thinking out this wonderful poem and all my poems in the next couple months. more…

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