Alone (oh my sweet child)



Empty void numbness, eyes unclear mouth silent tears fall from the inside, empty feeling the  clinch of the chest, it beats no more. Silent once more the love seems like yesterday but far away, mind travels love love love oh my sweet child comfort broken shattered falls heavily to the ground screams with no words. Silence once more, I'm the blame but to who's name shall I mutter on long rainy night but clear sky's  over take. wait that cloud is mine my shadow so gently outlined on the cold concrete of my soul rain falls my dark cloud attached to the pain of love love love a kiss on the cheek unique that one change one sentence all but yet forgotten clinched chest awaken that feeling off the deep. Silent once more, it's all but worth it smile conceal breathe mending old bonds to seal the hearts leakage it flows so effortlessly oh you sly devil how you fool me with dreams and ambition burned to take away through lock ups and vaccines forced into a corner of depression misery which there is no return I am the one no superhero intent  Vaguely a empty vessel filled with tears inside how much can there  be I guess that depends on ME....

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A struggle with a broken heart and being alone is the best way I can put it

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Written on November 07, 2021

Submitted by Greenasious on November 08, 2021

Modified on April 21, 2023

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