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You failed her!!

Larry Lowry 1959 (Pryor)

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You failed her!! She lays prone on a field neck broken. You sit in a room staring at a floor feeling that its melting ready to swallow you.  You failed her what should your punishment be? Would you have your eyes put out and be dragged across broken glass? She lays cold in the ground as your scream and plead for her back but no corpse to hug her back to life and her kind words. YOU FAIlED.

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What happens when you failed your love.

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Written on October 06, 2021

Submitted by Lowlarr on November 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A
Characters 392
Words 78
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
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