The Bay So Close But So Far Away



Suzy walks by the bay
Step by step, she follows the waves
drawing her closer as they sway
As if they were alive, asking her to follow them to the place they go to play.

As she gets closer, she hears them say,
You are our friend, follow us, so we can play for days
In fear, Suzy runs away
hoping the horrible nightmare of going back home fades away.

But no matter where she goes, “home” will be there in every way
Her fears keep her up during the day and night
With no intention of going back to the days by the bay,
Suzy later realizes that every home has a bay.

About this poem

This poem is about facing your problems even if you don't want to because our problems are the gateway to the solutions we long for.

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Written on October 27, 2021

Submitted by sagalastur on October 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAA AXAA AXAA
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 555
Words 114
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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