Thy will



What does it mean for thy will be  done?
Cause it seems to the me that done is already !
Even when will of the me is drifting away from  thy' s will,
That is already included in the done of the will.
 
Oh, I get it!
Done it's a process,
The process of being.
Cause without you being a me, you wouldn't even know your you.
Therefore for you to know you
The will of a me it happens in you.

Oh, the me is getting even more..
Me is a you, the mirror of you
included in you,
Like in me's brain where are so many of me,
Me is a one of the many of you.

So that's what is means to be in service of you.
And even if me will never be a totally you,
What's left of the me is praying by doing
Until it's no longer included in the done of thy will,
Cause me is just one of the many of you.
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Submitted by d.minculescu on October 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABB XXCDDD XDDAD DDCBD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 759
Words 169
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 5, 5

Florin Dragoș Minculescu

Once upon the time I had a friend and his name was Me. I and Me were indissoluble friends, he was I' s world. One day, Me decided to go in search of self and at one point disappeared. I is better now without him. Me was anxious, scared and had a lot of wishes and opinions about everything. Now, that Me is gone, I has discovered a peace that it didn't know it existed. more…

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