Sabbathi 2005 (Bakersfield, California)

I was doomed by birth
doomed just living on planet earth
People just wanna tear others down
thats just how the world works
War is the illusion
peace has no possible way of working
So bury me now
bury so deep in the ground that when judgement day comes ill be the last soul trying too get into heaven

About this poem

The poem was released on October 10th, 2021 by high school student Patrick "Sabbathi" Carter. The poem surrounds the idea of despair. Sabbathi references heaven has being the only thing good about death.

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Written on October 10, 2021

Submitted by Sabbathi on October 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

17 sec read

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 292
Words 59
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8


Sabbathi (also known has Patrick L.T Carter) is a high school poet from Bakersfield, California. He's inspired by poets like Bob Dylan, Jim Morrison, John Keats. He writes poetry about his thoughts, death, love and heart breaking experience. more…

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